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Liam: Tentacle Boy

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Liam is a character who is currently staring in the script im writing. Here is the intro if anyone wants to waste their time XD Im not much of a script writer, so any constructive criti is welcome ^^



EXT. SUBURBAN NEIGHBORHOOD-AFTERNOON.

LIAM walks home from school looking slightly worried. He is wearing long sleeves and gloves despite the warmer weather. He reaches his home and hurriedly heads inside.
He enters a neatly kept average suburban home. Small nautical decorations can be found throughout the house. He pulls some papers from out of his bag and then drops his backpack off on the kitchen floor and takes a seat at the counter.
He shuffles through the papers.

LIAM
DAD! I’m home! I have some papers I need you to sign!
A large bulky figure wearing a business suit enters the room and approaches Liam.

DAD
Sure, sounds good. Have any problems with your first day of classes?

The large father digs for a pen on the counter.

LIAM
Ehh... It was ok. How was work last night?

The father begins to sign the documents, and as so it is revealed that the father has clawed hands and tentacles where his mouth should be.

DAD (CTHULHU)
Well I found out that Poseidon and and that bum from Atlantis are going ahead on that business merger. So unless I’m able to work something out with Kraken I really feel like I’m going to be losing some business this year.

Cthulhu pauses, groaning and rubbing his temples. He continues talking while grabbing a snack for Liam out of the pantry.

CTHULHU
-but enough about work. Tell me more about classes.

Liam avoids eye contact. And animatedly shoves shrimp crackers in his mouth in order to avoid the subject. After a few moments Liam unavoidably swallows the crackers. He sighs.

LIAM
Are you sure I can’t be home schooled?

With this last sentence Liam makes an animated gesture in which his glove slips off from under his sleeve, revealing that his arms are tentacles.

CTHULHU
You know very well how important it was to your mother that you have a normal school experience. That's why I had us move out here after the incident. It’s what she would have wanted.

LIAM
Dad, why do you keep calling it “the incident?” You ate her. You don’t accidently eat someone.

CTHULHU
Shhhhh. Despite what happened, I cared about your mother very much. I couldn't help it, these things happen when you’re The Elder God. Nevertheless, you’re half human son, you should blend in effortlessly.

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INT. HIGH SCHOOL HALLWAY-AFTERNOON.

Liam struggles as he awkwardly attempts to open his locker with his noodly arms. Kids passing by laugh and snicker.

CUT TO:
INT. HIGH SCHOOL CLASSROOM-AFTERNOON.

Teacher is taking roll and pauses before calling Liam’s name.

TEACHER
Um... Liam? How would you pronounce your last name?

Liam sinks into his seat and after some hesitation he responds to her question with a series of nautical sounding screeches.

The teacher appears dumbfounded as the rest of the classroom looks in shock.
Liam sinks further into his seat.

CUT TO:
INT. SCHOOL CAFETERIA-AFTERNOON.

Liam sits with his sack lunch in front of him. He empties its contents to reveal a large raw fish and an assortment of uncooked and disgusting looking sea food.
Kids sitting close to him move away discreetly.

CUT TO:
INT. BACK TO KITCHEN-AFTERNOON.

Liam looks down at his tentacle arms and then back up at his father skeptically.
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Brandy2542's avatar
Awesome job! I like the design and story.